Will you check my grammar please?

Arlene Maycumber: I'm able to handle a higher education studies because I have the desire to improve my life and my knowledge.Moreover, I know how valuable an education is, not just related to life quality and money, but also the general knowledge and privilege to get a post-secondary education.I believe technology is and will continue to improve our society. I see technology as a huge opportunity to change society.On the other hand, business is a broad field which has helped society, years ago it created jobs and boosted economies around the world.That is the reason why I made the choice to go into Management Information Systems.I have many goals after to get a MIS degree. One of my main goals is to help Canadian companies in regards to outsourcing technology services and improving their business using information technology.Finally, I want to create a charity more able to help children in becoming computer literate and at the same time provide food to them....Show mor! e

Ester Bryand: I'm able to handle higher education studies because I have the desire to improve my life and knowledge. Moreover, I know how valuable education is, not just related to quality of life and money issues but also about the general knowledge and privilege to get a post-secondary education. I believe technology is improving and will still improve our society. I see technology as a huge opportunity to change society. On the other hand, business is a broad field which has helped society create jobs and boost economies around the world. That is the reason I choose to specialize in Management Information Systems. I have many goals after getting an MIS degree. One of my main goals is to help Canadian companies with outsourcing technology services and improve their business using information technology. Finally, I want to found a charity designed to help children with computer literacy and at the same time provide food to them.Hopefully, you're a non-native Engli! sh speaker, because the grammar was pretty poor....Show more